The plot
When I started my creative writing course at the University of East Anglia, I planned to write a serial killer story based in Perth. I wanted to capture that sense of an invisible threat hiding in plain sight that had stayed with me for more than two decades since the 1990s and early 2000s, during and after the Claremont murders and the subsequent police investigation. But once the perpetrator was charged, and later convicted in September 2020, I no longer wanted to write that story. I wanted to write fiction, not something based on real events.
After my debut was published, I returned to the idea of writing a serial killer story set in the place I’d grown up. Could I use that same sense of lurking threat but turn it on its head? I wanted to write a serial killer plot that didn’t centre on the perpetrator, but instead on two young women affected differently by a series of murders in their neighbourhood. Most of all, I wanted to take this particular example of male violence, the serial killer, and have my two young protagonists try to strip him of his power.
As is often the case, this was a lot harder than anticipated. I’m a planner who likes to have a plot outline before I begin, but this novel didn’t want to be written that way. For most of the first draft I didn’t know who the killer was, how they killed their victims, or how they got away with a seemingly impossible set of crimes. All I could do was trust the setting and characters to get me there as long as I didn’t give up.
It was only in the final chapters, at the same time as Carmen and Raych, that I found out why some aspects of the setting were crucial to the plot, why they’d noticed them, and how it all came together.
As is often the case, this was a lot harder than anticipated. I’m a planner who likes to have a plot outline before I begin, but this novel didn’t want to be written that way. For most of the first draft I didn’t know who the killer was, how they killed their victims, or how they got away with a seemingly impossible set of crimes. All I could do was trust the setting and characters to get me there as long as I didn’t give up.
It was only in the final chapters, at the same time as Carmen and Raych, that I found out why some aspects of the setting were crucial to the plot, why they’d noticed them, and how it all came together.